Score: 10

"I love the art style!"

submission: The Homeless Vagabond

date: November 14, 2008

Nice work on the simplistic, cartoony style of the Flash; it's certainly very creative. The whole "silent cartoon" approach definitely helped make this even better, and the music is just perfect.

I hope to see more from you on Newgrounds, keep up the good work!

Score: 8

"Very Clever!"

submission: Dream 404

date: August 25, 2008

I don't have much to say about this except it's very original. You don't see many Flashes like this on Newgrounds.

The stop-motion was nice; I like how the image gradually "formed" as it was being drawn bit by bit.
Considering that the actual drawing was done in real life as opposed to just doing it in Flash; this is especially impressive. Well done!

Score: 6

"Not bad, though it could use some work."

submission: Liveswif tutorial basic

date: June 1, 2008

This is a fairly useful tutorial for new users if they are having trouble getting started (I especially liked how the "tools" part of the tutorial had different parts of the Liveswif program as buttons), but it could use a little more information on how to use the tools, etc.

The graphics are decent, although the "tools" part of the tutorial looks a little crowded.

You definitely need to fix the sound, though, and like other reviews have said, the Liveswif link doesn't work.

Considering that this was made in Liveswif, which is not as feature-filled as Adobe Flash, this is alright, though like I said, it needs some more work.

Score: 9

"I can't stop listening to this!"

submission: -Emotion Burst locomotion-

date: July 15, 2008

I'd say this version is much better than the original, although I did listen to this first. The harmonies between the instruments help make the song varied with a nice lively rhythm, although a few parts are a little repetitive.
Apart from that, nice work!

Score: 8

"I quite like this!"

submission: Ode

date: May 22, 2008

This song has a great rhythm. The instruments suit the song well, especially the backing piano, although the song can be a little repetitive at times. The way it just fades out at the end almost like the beginning adds a nice finishing touch.

Well done!

Score: 9

"It's certainly futuristic..."

submission: Cerebral Digitization

date: May 16, 2008

This song sounds like it would suit a hectic, futuristic scene. I especially like how it's varied yet still manages to keep a sense of rhythm. Well done!